Comments of chapter undefined of The Golem Mage

Need some polishing, but so far it's interesting and good concept .

harsh and blunt writing style could do if you explained some of the more important pieces in more detail, but the comedy works well with it, making it overall good 😀

Thanks for the chapter. Love the Grandfather and grandson there funny Also keep improving.

I would advise finding someone well versed in the english language who fixes some of the sentences and grammar. This would increase the readability immensely.

I like it

Primer capítulo, me gustó la narración. 👍

I love it! Waiting for more chapters.

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While the story is well-written, I prefer narratives that are not in the first-person point of view. :(