God_Doom
Author, a single problem that I noticed in this chapter, is that you did a lot of preparation scene, the beginning is ok, the dialogue between enemies, but the final 2/3 it seems that the Ares is waiting for everyone to arm themselves, which may be an option, but it breaks the mood for me. There could be a few small scenes of clashing between the Amazons and Ares, the queen could orders the other warriors to make battle formations and arm themselves, implying that the conflict is already taking place because what I understand is that the two groups are in a loby selecting weapons before fighting.
Whilst Queen mother and Ares preparing for War as age old enemies engaged in final preparations against Ares and his horde of trolls . As Queen mother didn't trust or give him a weapon to fight with the Amazon's army. Meantime ,Diana Prince gets the responsibility she's always wanted but at the worst time in the middle of a war zone with the God's . Later on , Bruce Wayne dons his nanotech armor ( Berserk Fury mode ) and a magical horse and Diana called in magic ,it's science magic Diana,Still so naive about the power of science in man's world . We'll see how it goes next time for our Bruce Wayne and Diana and Queen Mother, Ares vs Amazon's at the meantime . Continue on Cheers !