Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Gray Sorcerer

Disappointment, all this just to act like an idiot? Seriously, he is older and he would know how to deal more with said love and he saw more beautiful women than Cho, go ahead

A grown man acting like this over an 11 year old is crazy. What a waste of time reading this.

This is just forced unnecessary drama! What's up with this sudden haughty attitude, immediately calling Slytherin to only change its mind for drama. If I remember correctly, the hat is immediately removed once a house is called bit this just played out for... plot? Only a few chapters in already seeing stuff like this.

Dropped

Harry Potter: Card Drawing System. Just a changed name (novel and MC) and polished the grammar

reasons for dropping1 gaunt family and ravenclaw 2 cho3 ravenclaw 4 promising to wash the hat, even though it probably won't happen but still 5 Snape was left out when cho came into play for some reason

dumb idea to switch house because of a girl he's just eleven for crying out loud besides he has an adult mind and should act like it duuuuuh

Acho que ele é estupido. A primeira garota que ele viu já está agindo assim? Eles se viram 2 vezes só, as coisas tão muitos forçadas e apressadas, deveria ser feito lentamente

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

O Mc parece um cachorro, viu um osso de qualidade e esquece todo o resto.😮‍💨🤦🏻‍♂️

Once again, the whole romance between a 12 year old and a guy that is mentally in mid 20s or early 30s is really creepy. Should we report the author to FBI?

Just letting you know that 11 year olds don’t flirt with each other. That is just weird and why would older students care. Are they all pedophiles or something.

gracias por el capitulo

I thank you for the chapter.

thought the water charm was aguamenti, the scorgifi spell was like a brillo pad like cleaning spell.... works to clean things but is uncomfortable.

Thanks for chapter