Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Clan of Shinobi

I don't recall it being said anywhere that the Raikage had the chakra levels of a Tailed beast. The only person who had such a title was Kisame who was called the No Tailed Beast. I don't know if you're mistaken or if you're just trying to hype the Raikage.

I think those reviews were after you explained that you married Oden to the OCs as Sarutobi's niece, which I also think is stupid, but each head is a world I suppose I see it totally unnecessary, better use characters from the same world as Naruto, but you are the author so you decide

Will he try to learn the 8 gates? And he needs to learn sealing for the 4th war, he can create thousands of clones just for creation war grade explosion seals he can even sell them to konoha so he can empower it. And also did he learn exploding shadow clone jutsu? It can go kamikaze on the mfs

while I don't like leaving reviews, when a fic is this good, I have to.while the story is going by fast, the pacing is still very good, and the character interactions are good as well.I would like it if you added some rest days where Oden and Hinata spend the day together learning more about each other. maybe have Oden and Hinata go on a training/honeymoon soon (a little before or during the 2-year time skip) this way you could have Hinata reach s-class (kage) when naruto shippuden starts. plus you can make little mini arcs where they meet new people and maybe some girls join the "heram" during this time.all in all great fic

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for this chapter! I love it!

Thanks for this chapter, i really like you're story !

Thanks for the chapter

Gracias por este capítulo

Nice chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Question, what is character development?

noice 👌🏼

Thanks for the chapter and more

Id say minimum 3.9 stars if someone was to nitpick

Nice

Thanks for the good chapter

I think you deserve at least a 4 star but I put a 5 star to support.

You need to either slow down the pace or lengthen the chapters. Other than that I see no problems