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Comments of chapter undefined of Path of the Goblin King (On Break)

Invictus6
Invictus6Lv4Invictus6

Honestly I just recently discovered you and I have to say it was a really great read. Keep up the great work. Only complaint comes from the smut to story progression, you constantly go from small smut that isn’t really great smut to a info dump that makes it feel like I’m reading a translation. You should check out Cambrians work for inspiration. He has really good smut with story.

wet_nigga02
wet_nigga02Lv15wet_nigga02

Hey, thanks for keeping us updated and continuing the story. My suggestion would be after Snake Island, why don't you make a mermaid island like one piece, the anime u got shark girls octopus girls and so many sea creatures to choose from

TheGrimReaper313
TheGrimReaper313Lv14TheGrimReaper313

small suggestion have him do terra herself and become a god

wheelmann2003
wheelmann2003Lv15wheelmann2003

I agree that making a seafolk arc has promise