Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei - A Second Chance

Sorry, no chapter today... I'm sick and honestly just don't feel like writing at the moment.

Maybe it's time for the dragon god to return... I know it's still too early and he shouldn't feel much obligation to do Rudeus that favor but... I think it's about time... another story that you should cover is Roxy. He hasn't appeared for too long...

🔥🔥🔥 pls gib sylphy some screen time😭

read everything in one day, incredible work man, most enjoyable fanfic i ever read. keep going, your writing skills are great.

I read everything in 2 days my bro, well now it's time to wait (I give you 10/10) 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

Maybe improving the relation between rudeus and sylphy because they are already close to the age where in the original line they had already married or bring badigadi into the story because after rudeus gets his demonic eye badigadi is intrigued/jealous about everything kishirika told him about rudeus.

Zanoba and Cliff learning the dragon-god lenguage is a great way for them to develop and improve the Magic armor reading old texts describing the Fighting God armor and Magic circles from Laplace in later chapter, also I'm expecting how are you going to bring Julie

Thank s for the chapter! )

When will he have his romantic interactions with Silfy, Roxy and Eris. green mom, blue mom and red mom. heh

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! 😺 👍

I hope that Orsted gives the God-Rank Summon (Spirit) Magic Scroll to Rudeus as per their deal to protect Rudeus's family. Rudeus should learn & decipher the God-Rank Summon (Spirit) Magic-Circle on the Scroll before using it & just like the Original it should've lead to the Summoning of Pergius's familiar Arufnami as Rudeus's New Spirit-Servant. Pergius should've given God-Rank Summon (Beast) Magic-Scroll to Rudeus through Arufnami as an equivalent exchange to release Arufnami from Rudeus's service. Rudeus should've studied & learnt the God-Rank Summon (Beast) Magic circle on the Scroll before using, resulting in Summoning of Holy-Beast LEO. Then Rudeus should've used the newly gained knowledge of God-Rank Summon (Beast & Spirit) Magic-Circles to create a modified version of God-Rank Summon (Spirit) Magic-Circle to create an Army of Spirits. I would be reasonable to show that in the previous timeline, Pergius taught Summon (Spirit & Beast) & Barrier Magic to Rudeus & Zanoba upto this King-Rank. This Knowledge of King-Rank Summon (Spirit) Magic-Circle should be the reason why Zanoba was able to complete the Automaton & Magic-Armour whereas Rudeus was able to learn Teleportation & Time-Travel Magic.

Nice 👍

tftc