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Speaking very far ahead but if at some point you plan to write about rudeus getting to know perugius it would be a good idea to add the detail of perugius having a hard time teleporting rudeus to his fortress because of the difference in mana between the original line and the one you are writing.
Maybe improving the relation between rudeus and sylphy because they are already close to the age where in the original line they had already married or bring badigadi into the story because after rudeus gets his demonic eye badigadi is intrigued/jealous about everything kishirika told him about rudeus.