Comments of chapter undefined of Vegeta Hakaishin[Hiatus]

Thanks for letting us know and can harem be Bulma Tights Chi-Chi Vados Kusu Marcarite Heles Android 18 Android 21( Both evil and good) Launch Mai Maki

I like Krillin i realy do. But him and Android 18 geting together to this day lefts bad taste in my mauth . why.? Because Krillin ended as a punching bag of Dragon Ball series and victim of slap stick humor who is not even funny. Tenshihan at least have some warrior pride.

so far loving the concept, also im ok with this being your first novel just dont start rewritting over and over, i rathr if you get slowly better using new chaps than endelssly rewritting this, also a recomendation i hae for you is To Use the Dragonballs to make a wish so everyone think its normal for mc to have a harem, that way it will be logical for him to have one besides than being coaxed by him to became his womens because of his power

thanks and congrats for giving writing a chance I know I dont have the courage to do it thanks for the story cant wait to see how it develops

So the mc won’t be NTR’d right? They won’t cheat on him or anything? And I hope you don’t do clone lemons either (If you bring in clones in the first place)