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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Demon Swordsman

GraySerpent
GraySerpentLv3GraySerpent

VERY bad writing. Feels like a twelve year old wrote this. 'Special Ops Soldier' MCs are so cringe.

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Gallant_wolf
Gallant_wolfLv3Gallant_wolf

man you really need to work on changing pov properly it's confusing

Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv2Marcus_whatever

Mc x Tsunade

SaintSin
SaintSinLv4SaintSin

...This is all kinda cringe, not the worst, but...

Aledamonkey
AledamonkeyLv4Aledamonkey

Why are your spaces all f**ked? And, by the way, "commas" (",") should be put right at the end of a word, (<-like this) and should be followed by a space, the same rules apply to dots (".") as well as these: "?", "!" and ";". Just reading what you've written, at least once, would've made these issues apparent.

Rochirush
RochirushLv10Rochirush

Take Tsunade please

TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2TruthHurtsX1000

Says he otaku and loves maids but no harem. Seems author own way going against his own story lol

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

TY.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

HekAnw_
HekAnw_Lv1HekAnw_

Uau, cap desnecessário.

UwU_Supremacy
UwU_SupremacyLv3UwU_Supremacy

dies from cringe