Sitting_Duck
Loving this so far, I cannot wait to see how Callum creates a lightsaber in this world (I am assuming it will be merged with a staff and be a magical energy source for the crystal). In addition I would love to see more training for his abilities such as his template and magic. Although I do feel the conversations are a bit robotic or fast paced and could do with you adding in a little meat. Overall a brilliant start, cannot wait for more and would love to see a little extra details in the chapters.