Fluffypie
Bro your harmonic writing of your novel is causing symphonic headache when we are reading as it is like you are trying to write a love Letter to your first love by describing her uniqueness in a detailed way like a poet but you should know that we don't want to read the whole letter so that after completely reading that Letter only to understand it by your lover that it is love letter written to your lover to express your love
agrega a los que tu quieras xD Tsunade muestrale la oscuridad de su maestro de como experimento con el clan senju y le echo todo la culpa a danzo y sobre la vista gorda sobre el exterminio de uchiha. el mc tendra sangre uchiha? agregale un clan hyuga asi tendria alguien con las posibilidad de tenseigan