It was kind of my intention to portray the dissatisfaction of the Sannin with their teacher because of their disappointment over his leniency when it came to many matters... but it seems it ended up being disrespectful instead. So uh, maybe I'm not that great of a writer :3
thanks for the chapter. Nice one, however, Jiraya's description was a bit over the top IMO. It's just not consistent with the rest of the chapter. The last paragraph was great though. It's not over the top high literary..