Fluffypie
thanks for the chapter. Nice one, however, Jiraya's description was a bit over the top IMO. It's just not consistent with the rest of the chapter. The last paragraph was great though. It's not over the top high literary..
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Thank you for the chapter
A hokage, a sanin and the Ambu... Did none of them detect the bug? It's a joke? Since when did this become comedy?
Not sure if it was your intention but you made Jiraiya seem very disrespectful towards Hiruzen. It was kinda weird how disrespectful he was.
Thx for the chapter
Plot change i guess
gracias por el capitulo
Thanks for the chapter ! đ đ
Thanks for the good chapter
Thanks for the chapter
Will this have a harem?