Archonstine
I don't know how to feel about this chapter, just as I liked the mirror scenes in the previous chapter, I also got the feeling of: "did it have to be this way?", I mean, making this parallel between the scene in the movie, I don't know if Ricky would react exactly the same way as Will in that scene, anyway it's not a criticism, it was just me talking about how I felt reading this chapter, keep up the good work.
Good writing, but itâs an entirely unnecessary discussion with Al Pacino. Disclosing your otherworldly abilities and the timeline of getting them to Al does nothing to the story. Heâs not a priest, you donât need to confess anything to him. Now, as far as delegating the editing of the film to others? Since the film was literally shot on film, you should have an editing team. After the conversion to digital? Do it on your own. With a preexisting movie in your head and your gamer abilities? Anybody else working with you will slow you down. It will require you to redo a lot of the work. You will become so skilled and super humanly fast that anyone elseâs editing wonât be comparable. At that point, youâd be doing a disservice to allow anyone else to edit your films.