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Free Shinobi in Naruto(With Divine Purple Card)

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Blazeshield21
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I think that you have been doing pretty well on the story so far, the only thing I would suggest would be to try and add some more twists to the story here and there sometimes.

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Blazeshield21
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also maybe somthing about him using the powers of the purple card more.

1yr

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Mercurio
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It's kind of annoying that all the time the premise is reinforced that he is a stranger that no one has the slightest good will towards and that he is all cold and emotionless.

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Endo_Cero
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It's a bit annoying to see him act like a robot.....I'm missing a chapter with his point of view (up to here I almost couldn't empathize with the mc)....it's like watching a robot movie😅😅😅 PS: thank you

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CBaudus35
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he need his own place, and an objective, rivals or ennemi, he hus only fighting mobs

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Zero93
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Thanks for chapter

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DaoistF0koDD
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gracias por el capitulo

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GRANDMAESTA_30
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Thank you for the chapter.

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ilyaso
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Ty for chapter

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JapaOuO
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Thanks for the chapter

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Aye_itz_cloudz
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Thxs for the chap

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Sir_Dood
Sir_DoodLv2Sir_Dood

If he was with the suna nin he should have met temari.

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Immortal_Studiant
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He didnt got a nice reputation in suna when he was with rock shinobi in the past, he must know to them

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