Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

I wish there were less system novels. Like, yes, the story’s going great so far, but why do you need a system to designate tasks and get outrageous rewards, just make a training arc and work hard for your results. Plus we could finally, stop reading “*Ding host… this or *Ding host… that.

okay, it's developing quite well

Eh whatever. Imma just skip to the system part.

Thanks author for the chapter

system be like

You needed to take more time developing the characters in the early transition stages instead of jumping straight to "look epic system cheat"

You haven't done a very good job of portraying his love for books. It makes sense of course given his background but as far as actually illustrating it, you've left much to be desired. For comparison look at how Patrick Rothfuss illustrates Kvothe's love of music and knowledge in The Name of the Wind.

ahhh golden finger

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