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Hearing about the mother just made me angry, what she did was despicable and there is no real other way to state that. It isn’t something that can be made out to even be slightly simpathetic no matter her reasoning. There is no justification for it and then hearing the father call her kind just made me angry.
It’s okay, I’m not sure if it works like that since sage mode is supposed to be in the sage regions and fuinjutsu not as well spread but those dont matter much I’ll just say AU if it looks off. I don’t know if author reads other popular fanfics on here but your writing style is very different to read, it feels very formal while trying to be eloquent and having more words, the story is good though looking forward to the rest👍