PrinceClover
l quite like this chapter such a shame you recieved such a big hater with the first chap, I liked it how you didn't let them get you down or smth! Thanks for the chapterđ
Wow, so small number of coments for that chap. In my opinion start is confusing, we very few info about background on start . You mayby want make it mysterious, but you need give us some better background to imagen scen.It's a bit like the actors were at a good level, but the background was presented in the form of a wooden sign with the word forest. (: *********************************************************************** If someone has better idea be my guest and write it. Let's help this autor develop his writing skill to another lvl.