Comments of chapter undefined of Devil's Cry

Wow, so small number of coments for that chap. In my opinion start is confusing, we very few info about background on start . You mayby want make it mysterious, but you need give us some better background to imagen scen.It's a bit like the actors were at a good level, but the background was presented in the form of a wooden sign with the word forest. (: *********************************************************************** If someone has better idea be my guest and write it. Let's help this autor develop his writing skill to another lvl.

thanks for the chapter

l quite like this chapter such a shame you recieved such a big hater with the first chap, I liked it how you didn't let them get you down or smth! Thanks for the chapter🙂

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I like it , and that one looks like Kim dokja KDJ! 😊