Aaron_Chong_6689
realistically i dont see this guy caring for this girl so much unless if its the mc love interest, if i just meet someone and this happened I would feel sorry but like it felt forced because he needed to do this although I do see why he did that also if you include the mission god gave him but i dont see him being raged to the point of a new technique for a girl he just met like 2 days ago, also is this harem (if mc has more than one love interest, yes that is harem whether you like it or not).
beautiful, sublime The truth is your novel is great, you added that touch that makes one get hooked on the novel. Not everything is rosy bad things happen is part of life, and writing that already makes you better than many writers who only make good things happen to their protagonists and they never experience bad things or ups and downs. full vanilla novels are disgusting, they are too boring, so I thank you for not being like those writers.