Mizuki forgot the golden rules. Snitches get stitches and nobody likes a rat.

I didn't mean anything bad about that. I just think that this part of the story stands above the rest. It is some good writing.

Gonna say this now but the war material of this story is probably gonna be the best part of this whole thing. And this is a story about "superheroes".

You gave it your best. That is all we can ask for.

Dude you can't just get me excited and blue ball me when things are about to get good. Now I know that the real villain of the story is the author himself. Still great chapter.

I'm on the edge of my seat. What could Cooler want? I always imagined him as the more reasonable one compared to Frieza. Like less likely to execute you on the spot for a minor mistake as long as it doesn't happen too often.

The MC has knowledge and power to change the world. And the choice to be a hero or a villain. But due to a lack of empathy and morality he has absolutely no interest in anything around him unless it is to achieve his goal of gaining power. It is honestly sad and pathetic.

*cough* This Bites *cough*

Would you say Theo got humbled this chapter?

I wish back in highschool I could pass tests by doing absolutely nothing.

That's devious.

Suffering from success.

I wonder what Deidara and Sasori's reactions were when he busted down the cave entrance.

The more things change the more they stay the same.

I'm on the edge of my seat and this chapter ends on a cliffhanger. So evil.

Just started reading this yesterday and now caught up. I noticed in the beginning you were going full speed towards your destination but then started to slow down and enjoy the scenery. Good call. I like getting to the point as much as everyone else but I do like myself a slow burn because the payoff would be well worth it. And by taking the time to flesh out the world and it's characters enriches our experience and shows how much you care about a story. Can't wait to see the next volume.

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Here is my reaction to Mephisto getting played.

Today I learned that water can leak from my eyes.

I don't care what other people think, but the realistic Ultron route for this story is gold. The way Ultron systematically destroyed the world was brilliant. You killing your main character was a bold move and the only critique I have is how long it actually took for him to figure out it was Ultron. Can't wait to see how this will now develop since you ended the world. :D