Comments of chapter undefined of The Primordial Record

Okay so how long is The 3rd Prince going to be stay smug? Don't tell me he is the Final Villain? I would want him to be taken care of by the time he is done with Trion. I don't like it, he seems to be the type who thinks everything is always under their control. Also I don't wish for him to be the late or Endgame Boss, cause it doesn't fit the background story. It would be good if his end brutal and full of despair, otherwise it won't be satisfying enough.Now let's talk about your writing style. The world you created is so cool. Characters are good too. But your writing style is God Awful. Too many unnecessary words and recurring pattern of writing like using "...for it was...." frequently. These kind of phrase are not suitable for a book on wn platform. If you can discard unnecessary words it could be a really good work "for" people can then bear reading it 1/2 chapter a day.