kamidemond
Author, the story started great at least until chapter 30 or so but after that there are só many errors in the story(not grammar ones) and plot holes that the quality dropped from 5 to 3 stars at best, you should really fix them fast. And one more thing, if you want to make a template character you should really familiarize yourself with the things he can really do, minato never learned sage mode or the rasenshuriken so how was kirito able to learn them through the system? And you should show the progress of the template and show what he learns in each step, including the elemental Justus, and add some diversity in them, the forth should have known more basic jutsus, and as a jinjuriki kirito should really take advantage of his close to ilimited chakra.