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Comments of chapter undefined of In Naruto With Minato Template

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Kalawang
KalawangLv4Kalawang

you're good at nerfing ur mc for no reason

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Anonny_Anonymous
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I’m so sick of fics where the MC loses arms.

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Ather47
Ather47Lv7Ather47

MC kind of deserved it he was getting cocky and lazy

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LeonardoDiCaprio1
LeonardoDiCaprio1Lv4LeonardoDiCaprio1

good chapter keep it up

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Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Thx

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machadogbc
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Author, the story started great at least until chapter 30 or so but after that there are só many errors in the story(not grammar ones) and plot holes that the quality dropped from 5 to 3 stars at best, you should really fix them fast. And one more thing, if you want to make a template character you should really familiarize yourself with the things he can really do, minato never learned sage mode or the rasenshuriken so how was kirito able to learn them through the system? And you should show the progress of the template and show what he learns in each step, including the elemental Justus, and add some diversity in them, the forth should have known more basic jutsus, and as a jinjuriki kirito should really take advantage of his close to ilimited chakra.

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Wolfiewolfington
WolfiewolfingtonLv4Wolfiewolfington

Thank you

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Ren_Ao
Ren_AoLv3Ren_Ao

This chapter is reminding me one fic that mc has shanks template. He has to cut off his left hand to maximize his template. He recognized it when his hand was cut by enemy. The similarity is mc has haki and gryphon sword

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D_angr
D_angrLv4D_angr

thanks for the chapter

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Happy_days
Happy_daysLv4Happy_days

thanks for the chapter