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Very good first chapter, the use of the world(Very intriguing) as a story hook was a good idea. You can't help but get exited at what the MC might make in this solo leveling X game developer like world. We also got some character development, Showing that the MC was a game critic in his past life, and showing his game prowess with the spear training game. As a person who has read a lot of reincarnation stuff, I can appreciate the glossing over of the reincarnation aspect. Overall, very good first chapter.