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keldarr_028021hCommentedYou forgot the greatest pound for pound boxer Mike Tyson!
Of course, she still met two enthusiastic and proactive students in gym class while playing volleyball: one named Mike Newton and a boy with a name combining the basketball god and the father of physics.- keldarr_02806dCommented
Noooooooooooooo it has become legion!
"The world is going to love it!" - keldarr_02808dCommented
Sad times best book on the platform hope you return
I suppose I should just get this out of the way. The next chapter after this one is going to be the last Dead End chapter for a while. The story ran much, much longer than I thought it would (it'll likely be almost 420k words after this next chapter). While I still enjoy the story and characters very much, I've just about burned myself out on them for the time being. - keldarr_02808dCommented
You can’t make money off intellectual property you don’t own be careful what you are asking is illegal.
Let's do this—if we get 800 initial subscriptions, I will update five chapters every day!! - keldarr_028016dCommented
What the heck the story was interesting and bro you are literaly leaving on a cliffhanger not cool man not cool
I've made too many mistakes with this story and didn't keep track of things which became too much. Which is ultimately my fault, and for that I apologize. - keldarr_028017dCommented
I really hate cliffhangers like this
Both were ready to confront each other.… - keldarr_028019dCommented
Sad truth brother
(TL: God Damnit, STOP!!! This is hard to translate, because I know I'm so goddamn poor!) - keldarr_02801mthCommented
This
Yes - keldarr_02801mthCommented
To love ru is a great idea[img=nervous]
Hey guys, I have decided that in the home world, I will add magic. But it will be very low like it was in DragonMaid. So, only very few people can use it, like families with some magical heritage. And I was thinking how about I add Tu Love Ru as well a little sci-fi shit won't be bad as well. - keldarr_02801mthCommented
It’s Dwelling not weaving
"Unfortunately, although I took advantage of my position as the official of the luminous church branch, I didn't find anything about the weaving of the Spirits" - Arata shook his head lightly, but soon smiled - "but don't worry, as he will summon someone who knows the way today". - keldarr_02801mthCommented
Bro the first one is free and usually the first 3 to 5 only cost 1 mat with decreased chance to succeed .
Clicking on the Yes button immediately, Issei was excited to know that his favorite weapon was already becoming more powerful. Now, he was going to be on the lookout for these materials. Closing his screen, Issei began walking quietly through the hallways. - keldarr_02801mthCommented
His
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Not any more rofl!
"What's wrong? Is there something on my face?" Xiao Ze touched his cheek, finding it as clean as ever. - keldarr_02801mthCommented
Scum of the earth!
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Just pointing out there are multiple spelling errors here.
In his embrace was a sleeping Ais, who, after defeating Barol yesterday and completing two quests, had returned to Orlare with Ais and Fenn. They arrived late at night and slept through until morning. - keldarr_02802mthCommented
Jesus man you literaly have 2 of the trifecta systems all you missing is the gamer why you crying
Honestly, I was hoping for some powers that could help me... and I got a hemorrhoid ointment and a chat group. - keldarr_02802mthCommented
ROFL why do the random panties alwayse come from here rofl
Hestia's Panties (C) - keldarr_02802mthCommented
I have only done that if it’s blatant and reaccuring other wise I post a simple correction not to be an donkey but to be helpful
Most fanfic authors want to please their readers and write to the whims of the readers. But because of that, their fanfic becomes chaotic since not all readers are of the same mind. Like those who gave me powerstones, they like my fanfic and want more of it. But there are other readers who just read this to pass time and so, when they find a mistake, they demand the author to fix it. - keldarr_02802mthCommented
O I understand I tryed and it went nowhere after the third chapter I hit major writers block it sucke still can’t figure out how to proceed.
Psh! As if it was that easy to write. It's easy to read since even kids can do it, but write, bruh I won't tell you to write a fanfic or anything, but don't just assume it's that easy. - keldarr_02802mthCommented
I’m having no problems with the pace tho I would like a bit of action but meh you doing fine and I love to see authors with backbone they keep writing longer. So you do you and I’ll be here reading it!
Second of all, I got a comment from a reader who mentioned that this novel is slow and becoming filler-like (From his words, I'm more on telling and not showing) {If he is reading this, then meh, I don't care}.