Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Its a good chapter, name was the only thing to irk me and thats just because it isn't a Saiyan name but at least you didn't name him Jake or something like that. Have a stone.

Well, the protagonist doesn't look like those Chinese soap operas where he has 1 million fighting power training 1 hour a day and still complaining that he is weak, I disagree a little about Jiren the guy was basically perfect power, ki, control, techniques, speed, skills, resistance even his fighting techniques.

He should save his mom and dad with Kai Kai to take them to Namaki or something

he should save a part of the Saiyans, and be king on some hidden planet, if well trained, they are an extremely powerful force.

good chap, I love your work with this fanfic. It is going in a good direction. another question, will u use the movies like turles and stuff?

Oh a new chapter I have been waiting for this so when

in my translation the name of the mc and squirt 😂

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Tank yu for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

¡gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

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What is Kekkai? Is it from the DBZ universe?

thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

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Gracias por el capítulo. Una pregunta el mc ya es más poderoso que bardok

Good Work

Thankyou for the chapter