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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

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silent_reaper333
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great story author It feels fresh that someone has courage to write DBZ crossover without being sayian :3 Just a little advice about your story, it seems like a narration of events happening instead of an actual story try to write more character interactions give time to plat feels way to rushed like you're just skimming events... otherwise it's a great read keep up the good work ❤️

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Zero93
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Thanks for chapter

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Zynxavier
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He went with Jiraiya and taught Naruto his techniques. Well, I guessed a bit about the storyline according to the author's way of writing

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Zachariah_Browning_8961
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Make Ki shadow clones and he should start compressing his Ki to make god Ki cause anyone can get it if their strong enough

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Death_Promise
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Letting Haku go? Lol

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SIJO_James
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please don't make him fan of jiraya and make any comedy scenes please

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JustBuyingSoySauce
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:)

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Link_Kokiri_Fan
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Thanks for the chapter. It seems that Jin prioritizes technique master over improving his raw power. The System is converting most of his Chakra into Ki so he should have all the benefits the Z Fighters have. Yes he mastered 10x Gravity, but Z Fighters have as well in 1 year or less. Nothing wrong with him focusing more on technique, but when will he start pushing for more power?

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SIJO_James
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i said don't make comedies

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ItsDragonking
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Give him Haki pls

cyberlector_321
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gracias por el capitulo