kamidemond
great story author It feels fresh that someone has courage to write DBZ crossover without being sayian :3 Just a little advice about your story, it seems like a narration of events happening instead of an actual story try to write more character interactions give time to plat feels way to rushed like you're just skimming events... otherwise it's a great read keep up the good work ❤️
Thanks for the chapter. It seems that Jin prioritizes technique master over improving his raw power. The System is converting most of his Chakra into Ki so he should have all the benefits the Z Fighters have. Yes he mastered 10x Gravity, but Z Fighters have as well in 1 year or less. Nothing wrong with him focusing more on technique, but when will he start pushing for more power?