Comments of chapter undefined of Taking the place of the most insane primarch (Wh 40k)

I gave your story a chance and enjoyed every chapter. I’m no professional but grammar and sentence structure has made reading a bit clunky at times but overall enjoyable. Looking forward to more!

thanks for the chapter

as always, great.thank you for the chap.

Thanks for the chapter!

now all kharn and the boys need is Argel Tar and the squad is together

thank you very much for this chapter

Tftc

Thanks for the chapter

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¡gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Thanks for the chap

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