Comments of chapter undefined of How to Redeem a Trashy Side Villain
How to Redeem a Trashy Side Villain
nemolikessoju
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Apostle of noice gave what I think is great advice, so I will just say that maybe you could expand on or clear some things from previous chapters. Like his huge number of codes we dont know much about, or delve into demon curses, like if they can be released or if there is a chance people can interpret them, undoing his lies. These two are the main questions/curiosities I had while reading, so maybe it can help.
I mean, you are kind of writing filler. If before it felt like there was a set direction everything was headed, then it is simply stalled in place rn. I wouldn't advise writing a whole new thing and shelving this one for later though, that would be a little silly. You would just be trapped in a loop of wanting to write something else everytime you hit a creative wall, which to be blunt, is just evading the issue. --- I say try and think of a solid plot for like, the next ten chapters or so. Something that works up to all the big points you have thought up in the future. Rising action and foreshadowing so to speak. Just take your time. Your chaps aren't even monitized rn so theres no rush.
