nemolikessoju
I find the fight scenes... weird? I guess you could call this the "Tell not show" where the author only tells the scenes/story not show it to the readers, I couldn't picture the demon or the stake and wires, lastly the fight itself was something hard to imagine, it felt lacking with not much of an oomph, only telling what Bell did. Still enjoyed it though, especially, the family interactions, though maybe develop their characters more so we can feel their interaction and relationship more deeply. Hope you continue to improve, author.