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Comments of chapter undefined of How to Redeem a Trashy Side Villain

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harou
harouLv4harou

I find the fight scenes... weird? I guess you could call this the "Tell not show" where the author only tells the scenes/story not show it to the readers, I couldn't picture the demon or the stake and wires, lastly the fight itself was something hard to imagine, it felt lacking with not much of an oomph, only telling what Bell did. Still enjoyed it though, especially, the family interactions, though maybe develop their characters more so we can feel their interaction and relationship more deeply. Hope you continue to improve, author.

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Danstin_2010
Danstin_2010Lv5Danstin_2010

thanks for the chapter 😄.

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WonderOfU_
WonderOfU_Lv12WonderOfU_

Thanks for the chap

Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4Enlightened_Clown

The dialogues took away the intensity of the action scenes for me. It felt more like they were rehearsing for a skit than a real scene. Every action felt choreographed rather than being instantaneous reactions.

kjxudvc
kjxudvcLv13kjxudvc

❤❤