JasmineJosef
I am loving the true essence of the antihero that Rhain is. He is not in some innocent or blind denial. He is choosing actively not to follow the truth because his interest is not there. That takes another level of determination and cunningness. Even coldness. I always thought that these creatures who live long and remain very humane was unrealistic. Rhain shows that while he does have a caring side, he is also dark and enjoys terror. He is vampire. A true predator and that makes him realistic, complex and very interesting to read about because now there is real change to be seen and look forward to. There is also a long road for Daisy as she won't have a "normal" husband. I feel like these short stories is truly bringing out the best in you, jasmine. I am so invested and sucked in. Well done ๐ โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Caring or not (but he's more of the caring side), I still love our Rhain๐คญโค๏ธ That continuous banter with Daisy is what's keeping him sane and alive๐ That's what he's been craving for and only Daisy can give him that.๐ So loving our Daisy, she might be getting mixed emotions based on Rhain's actions now but a part of her still believes the truth in him. She's giving him the chance (I guess for this relationship to prosper) She'd have to get more truths from Rhain though. And yay, here comes the adoptive father๐ฌ I think I'm more nervous bout this visit than Rhain and Daisy's banter.Just tell her you care about her,Rhain! (Daisy will know if it's a truth or lie)tack Jazzy๐, such fine writing๐๐
Daisy is on to something, and I am living for it! She is picking up the small details and the "guilt." I think she is on point there. There are more hints about Rhain's past that I would love to dive into. This might have been the first time we didn't get to see the history of the ML early, but hints are beginning to appear.
๐๐ข๐๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ฃ'๐จ ๐จ๐ช๐ง๐ฅ๐ง๐๐จ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐๐ฃ ๐๐ ๐ง๐๐๐ก๐๐ฏ๐๐จ ๐๐ค๐ฌ ๐๐ค๐ค๐ ๐๐ ๐ง๐๐๐ก๐ก๐ฎ ๐๐จ ๐๐ฉ ๐ก๐ฎ๐๐ฃ๐... ๐๐ ๐๐จ ๐จ๐ค ๐๐ค๐ค๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฃ ๐ฉ๐ง๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐จ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐๐ก๐๐๐ซ๐๐จ ๐๐๐จ ๐ค๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐ก๐๐๐จ.!! ๐ฟ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ ๐ ๐ฃ๐ค๐ฌ๐จ...๐จ๐๐ ๐๐จ ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐ฉ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช๐ง ๐ฌ๐ค๐ง๐๐จ, ๐๐ช๐ฉ ๐จ๐๐ ๐ ๐ฃ๐ค๐ฌ๐จ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ ๐จ๐ค๐ข๐ ๐ฉ๐ง๐ช๐ฉ๐ ๐ข๐๐จ๐จ๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐ฃ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ข. ๐ฝ๐ช๐ฉ, ๐จ๐๐ ๐จ๐๐๐จ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐๐๐ง๐. ๐๐๐๐ฉ ๐ฌ๐๐ก๐ก ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐๐ค ๐ฌ๐๐๐ฃ ๐๐ฉ ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐๐ข๐ ๐ฉ๐ค ๐ง๐๐ก๐๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ช๐๐จ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐จ ๐ซ๐๐จ๐จ๐๐ก ๐ฉ๐ค ๐๐ค๐ฎ? ๐๐ฉ ๐ฌ๐ค๐ฃ'๐ฉ ๐๐ ๐๐จ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐จ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐ฉ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ... โน๏ธ๐ฅตโฅ๏ธ