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Comments of chapter undefined of Midnight Surrender

kt_cali
kt_caliLv14kt_cali

The adoptive father is going to trip out over the dynamics in this relationship ๐Ÿ˜†

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Needmorecoffee
NeedmorecoffeeLv14Needmorecoffee

I am loving the true essence of the antihero that Rhain is. He is not in some innocent or blind denial. He is choosing actively not to follow the truth because his interest is not there. That takes another level of determination and cunningness. Even coldness. I always thought that these creatures who live long and remain very humane was unrealistic. Rhain shows that while he does have a caring side, he is also dark and enjoys terror. He is vampire. A true predator and that makes him realistic, complex and very interesting to read about because now there is real change to be seen and look forward to. There is also a long road for Daisy as she won't have a "normal" husband. I feel like these short stories is truly bringing out the best in you, jasmine. I am so invested and sucked in. Well done ๐Ÿ‘ โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

Dusti_Martin
Dusti_MartinLv14Dusti_Martin

Well... nothing like the in-laws showing up in the middle of a marital spat! This should go over like a lead balloon.

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

This is a rollercoaster!!

KRS_90
KRS_90Lv15KRS_90

I am loving the banter between then but a little nervous about his adoptive father

Mara_Heller
Mara_HellerLv15Mara_Heller

oh wow this is going to be interesting ...

Kendall_Michalak
Kendall_MichalakLv15Kendall_Michalak

I wonder how this will go ๐Ÿ˜ฌ Thank you for the stellar chapter!!

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Caring or not (but he's more of the caring side), I still love our Rhain๐Ÿคญโค๏ธ That continuous banter with Daisy is what's keeping him sane and alive๐Ÿ˜Š That's what he's been craving for and only Daisy can give him that.๐Ÿ˜Š So loving our Daisy, she might be getting mixed emotions based on Rhain's actions now but a part of her still believes the truth in him. She's giving him the chance (I guess for this relationship to prosper) She'd have to get more truths from Rhain though. And yay, here comes the adoptive father๐Ÿ˜ฌ I think I'm more nervous bout this visit than Rhain and Daisy's banter.Just tell her you care about her,Rhain! (Daisy will know if it's a truth or lie)tack Jazzy๐Ÿ’•, such fine writing๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

Daisy is on to something, and I am living for it! She is picking up the small details and the "guilt." I think she is on point there. There are more hints about Rhain's past that I would love to dive into. This might have been the first time we didn't get to see the history of the ML early, but hints are beginning to appear.

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

๐™„๐™ข๐™–๐™œ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™š ๐™๐™๐™–๐™ž๐™ฃ'๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ช๐™ง๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ž๐™จ๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™๐™š ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฏ๐™š๐™จ ๐™๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™œ๐™ค๐™ค๐™™ ๐™๐™š ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ก๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ก๐™ฎ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ... ๐™ƒ๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ค ๐™œ๐™ค๐™ค๐™™ ๐™๐™š ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ž๐™˜๐™ ๐™š๐™™ ๐™๐™ž๐™ข๐™จ๐™š๐™ก๐™› ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™—๐™š๐™ก๐™ž๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™จ ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™ฃ ๐™ก๐™ž๐™š๐™จ.!! ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฎ ๐™ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™จ...๐™จ๐™๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ข๐™–๐™™ ๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ง๐™™๐™จ, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™๐™š ๐™ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ข๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™ข๐™ž๐™จ๐™จ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ข. ๐˜ฝ๐™ช๐™ฉ, ๐™จ๐™๐™š ๐™จ๐™š๐™š๐™จ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™˜๐™–๐™ง๐™š. ๐™’๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™™๐™ค ๐™ฌ๐™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ข๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™ง๐™š๐™ก๐™š๐™ฃ๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™ž๐™จ๐™ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ซ๐™š๐™จ๐™จ๐™š๐™ก ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™๐™ค๐™ฎ? ๐™„๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™—๐™š ๐™–๐™จ ๐™š๐™–๐™จ๐™ฎ ๐™–๐™จ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ ... โ˜น๏ธ๐Ÿฅตโ™ฅ๏ธ

Jennifer_Goliah
Jennifer_GoliahLv15Jennifer_Goliah

๐Ÿ–คamazing๐Ÿ–ค

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Our โ€œsweetโ€ Daisy is the kind of woman Rhain needs. He wanted no dowry; however, he got much more than he had anticipated. I can hardly wait to read about how the couple will behave towards each other in the presence of Rhainโ€™s adoptive father.

Jesk8
Jesk8Lv15Jesk8

Itโ€™s good to have this out in the open. Clears the road from kept secrets in the relationship. Unfortunately, itโ€™s a tough subject.

HannahBW
HannahBWLv14HannahBW

I wonder if Daisy will use this visit to her benefit, to rile Rhain up more. I like her sassiness and refusal to back down!

MaryCherry
MaryCherryLv14MaryCherry

this new personality definitely has me on the edge of my seat

Eulinda_Ogiste_2151
Eulinda_Ogiste_2151Lv14Eulinda_Ogiste_2151

These family members who just turn up whenever, they feel like it. Adoptive father what horror or glad tidings you bring with you.

LowVSdiamond
LowVSdiamondLv14LowVSdiamond

I REALLY didn't expect the big revelation of his nature to go this way but it's so intense and entertaining!!!Thanks a lit for the chapter Jasmine! ๐Ÿฅฐ

FormerPD2020
FormerPD2020Lv15FormerPD2020

More drama!!! I โค๏ธ drama!!

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

He care abou her he just dont relize he does yet they are so cute togather

Elizabeth_Poole
Elizabeth_PooleLv13Elizabeth_Poole

When is the next chapter releasing?