Paul_Okito
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
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I like The vivid descriptions of Egon's fear and desperation as he tries to save his mother create a palpable sense of tension and keep readers engrossed.
Why no comments in this chapter It feels a bit lonely
I think it's a great backstory, it introduces the motivation of the main protag [img=recommend]
