HideousGrain
I hope he doesn't have any difficulties during his stay at the Nest, I just want them to truly support and nurture him to become the Champion of the Nest or something. Don't want any arrogant members to make his life difficult. I also want to concentrate more on the Origin expanse territory expansion, settlements development, the growth of this subjects etc.
I am honestly always looking forward to the next chapters. In term of pace or setting keep doing what your doing. As for story I can’t really think of something i really didn’t like, so I guess that’s great :) I do have a (small) wish for story development: Micheal was able to fight and kill peak tier 4 creatures. So I am guessing that after he becomes a higher lifeform his combat power should spike again so by that point I guess he should be able to fight/kill (late/peak?) tier 5 beings. So i do feel that by that point his territory is falling behind. So I would like to see his territory get more powerful. Both in term of size and in term of peak combat power. For example: So some rapid expansion in population and maybe select some of his summons and push them to become higher lifeforms( micheal needed hundreds of time more energy than normal so he should be able to obtain resources to push a few to become higher lifeforms right? and the energy jug should help greatly)
I would enjoy less unbeatable foes and losses, Michal is finally growing and one thing I've seen authors do is instantly introduce more powerful foes, making it feel like the character can never win and is always on the back foot. just having him face a threat and destroy it without significant loss would help cement his growth before he faces stronger foes that while giving him trouble dont demolish him and his armies.