HideousGrain
I know I’m going to be a minority here, but I hate the way the romance is progressing. Can you please make it more natural and not this forced nonsense that is going on? Michael and Alice have never been awkward together and now in like 4 chapters, they have all of the sudden developed this massive crush to the point they cant speak without stuttering. I know they’re still “working” on their feelings and all, but it may as well be a guaranteed ship with both of their current attitudes. Not to mention Danny’s little mind link trick. If Alice always thought that, there should have been more awkwardness for the entire story’s, not just these last few chapters out of nowhere. I think Maria thinking he’s cute is fine as that has already been hinted at and she’s not being weird, but it just feels like the romance triangle is being shoved down our throats needlessly just to force Michael into a relationship magically and conveniently now that Danny is back and nothing else is going on. Like one little conversation shouldn’t create all this. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t mind romance and personally I ship him with Maria, but please for the love of everything stop doing it this way and make it naturally progress.
Nah, ain't no way the writer will build Maria's interest in him up, as well as her many good qualities for hundreds of chapters, then have her coincidentally sprout interest in Kaleb and get with Kaleb even though she has the highest-voted "future wife" tag in the webnovel character rankings lol ... It's my first novel of this author that I've read, but I don't think he'd play much of his audience that way, and get the audience loving her character just to have Kaleb and her get together... Would cause a lot of unhappy current customers xD ... Tons of real life rulers such as Mongol Khans, Ottoman Sultans, Chinese and Indian emperors, etc.., have had massive harems and our boi is also a ruler, so why can't just have 2 wives? 2 ain't even a harem anyway, by definition! lol, so technically it's still within the non-harem situation if some people don't want that ... This is more for the guys who don't like the direction this could be leading with Maria, but don't give up on the writer yet, as you don't know which way the wind is blowing... Just wait and see what happens