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Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Yarakiri
YarakiriLv12Yarakiri

I didn't like this chapter, it feels like everything is about Michael, when it shouldn't be. He's clearly not the only "nice" human. We are told that more than 5000 humans are coming but we have the impression that it is only 100 humans, I understand that a lot goes to the expanded origin but here we have the impression of a void. The world isn't alive, it seems like it only revolves around the mc and that's not good. I don't know if you know what I mean, it seems very important to me!

Yarakiri
YarakiriLv12Yarakiri

Thank you, good luck and keep it up!

HideousGrain:Well, he is the Leader but maybe he is not the leading force. Hard to explain without spoiling everything

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Ryan_Johnson_9496
Ryan_Johnson_9496Lv14Ryan_Johnson_9496

Maybe let the man keep his hair

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Saintstryfe
SaintstryfeLv15Saintstryfe

This is the only novel I've been willing to pay for early releases this month. The amount of effort and struggles and paying off in the quality of your work. Of the 20 or novels I'm currently reading, thus far this has been the most enjoyable pacing.To offer feedback because it was requested - I hope that relationships with supporting and side characters continue to be important. In too many novels in this genre as soon as the MC moves into a certain power tier, all the other characters/relationships that helped keep the mc relatable and likable disappear.I don't find all powerful characters who develop a god complex to be very interesting.At (or near) this stage I'd like to see more thoughtfulness from Michael go into picking his traits to develop a more cohesive system. At this stage his different powers feel like a grab-bag, which makes sense for now. A penalty for moving/swapping traits was introduced - while thats not necessarily a bad thing, Michael researching and making a custom mix of traits for different fights would be something I think I'd enjoy. Also to echo some other commenters - trait fusion!Finally, I hope the traumas Michael (and other characters) have developed continue to be something they have to work through and deal with and have meaningful impacts in decisions and actions. A lot of authors create trauma for their characters only to handwave them away a few chapters/arcs later when either its inconvenient or no longer what the author wants to focus on. At best you might get something that reads like, "He was sad and hurt, but he still behaved completely rationally and didn't let his emotions affect him at all. He overcame the problem and then was never affect by it ever again".

Damion_Wilcox
Damion_WilcoxLv15Damion_Wilcox

The story is great so far, the only issue i have that i hope is resolved within the next arc or so, just bc they felt rushed were him ignoring his parents, the sudden introduction to his sister and the coffin keychain

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Mewbacca
MewbaccaLv15Mewbacca

I've thoroughly enjoyed the book thus far and haven't noticed any glaring issues or problems thus far 👌

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Tone_deaf94
Tone_deaf94Lv15Tone_deaf94

Story is awesome mate

zakaria_f
zakaria_fLv15zakaria_f

The story is really good it s progressing smoothly. However i am worried for the future power scaling, as Michael will continue amassing soul traits and improving them I don't see a way for other human or races to contend with him if they don't find a way to at least improve the stars of their soul traits. Besides that nothing worries me you are doing a great job keep it going 👍👍👍

I_Am_Death
I_Am_DeathLv15I_Am_Death

I've enjoyed the story so far. The only problem I have is with some of his soultraits: glacicle for example, I hope he can upgrade/replace it to ice manipulation/creation, and I'm not much of a fan of the reinforced sword qi soultrait either since he cannot use it at full power due to his preferred choice of weapon

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ryuk_arun
ryuk_arunLv13ryuk_arun

Michael should upgrade his other soul traits by getting more soul start fragments

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SmileyMaskMan
SmileyMaskManLv13SmileyMaskMan

Tftc

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DreadSnoop
DreadSnoopLv14DreadSnoop

hope the battle exchange doesnt drag out too much and we can go to the flag war soon... i personally dont like tournament arks because it feels like filler even understading that you use the battle exchange to introduce new characters for us. And the story is great till now, the world you built is super good and make me imagine all sort of plots and plans for the mc in my head hehe. the only downside is that where i live is expensive to upgrade my privilege tier and i can just get the tier 1 ocasionaly :(

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NitramSomar
NitramSomarLv15NitramSomar

good job author! just write more hahahahaha

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Suited_Coder
Suited_CoderLv15Suited_Coder

really enjoying the story a lot, and the pacing. I also like that Michael is starting to trust more as he gets back to himself after losing his brother.I do wonder if he will get to the point of having a close circle of connections that he trusts enough to share more about his soul traits and helps them grow theres. such helping him speed his territory development further as more resources are funnelled Into him.it's quite clear with the curse of the bloodline that very difficult hardships will appear bringing him to the life and death again and again, what them challenges will be well that's all part of the storykeep up the amazing work, this is a stunning book, with endless possibilities for the future

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brandon_collins
brandon_collinsLv13brandon_collins

Extremely entertaining story and great pacing. I couldn't help but buy chapter privilege thinking 10 then 20 then 40 would be enough only to then feel more pulled towards finding out what happens next

Nykirean_Williams
Nykirean_WilliamsLv15Nykirean_Williams

this story is progressing perfectly. not to fast and not to slow. i like it alot

wildbaby
wildbabyLv4wildbaby

the story is great, there're no major flaws or something in my opinion..

Brandyn_Cahoon_5616
Brandyn_Cahoon_5616Lv14Brandyn_Cahoon_5616

Can he marry the Feirce beauty

Abybest11
Abybest11Lv15Abybest11

the story is wonderful so far. only want him to him to focus on acquiring elemental soul traits. and the story says that he acquired many martial arts techniques from the Lord rift but it hasn't been explored. And he has to acquire a sword. because he just doesn't use the spear well. it's either he purchases spear arts or he should rather do that for tiara.

Judas_Iscariot
Judas_IscariotLv14Judas_Iscariot

The pace is slower than the average novel here... But I do think it is necessary for the sake of character progression and the world building...Personal suggestion : just make sure the wait is worthy in the end... or you can use some "mystery" / "curiosity" at the start of the big episode so the reader have a better reason to waitGood luck with that author, 11/10 will always waiting

Krisnan
KrisnanLv15Krisnan

He keeps finding new ways to use extraction whichbis great. what id like to see when hes less busy is a think tankbon new ways to try using it. im sure it has a lot of untapped potential but if you have just one mind contemplating stuff you'll have gaps.