Comments of chapter undefined of Blood Moon Hunter in the Vampire Apocalypse
Blood Moon Hunter in the Vampire Apocalypse
DragonKnov
Chapter comments2
All the jumps through time can get kind of confusing sometimes. Like why add the part where he’s running at the beginning? Also confusing when something is happening in one chapter and then you backtrack at the next chapter and redescribe the scene from a third person perspective for like 4-5 paragraphs and take the readers back out of the scene. Especially with all the different POVs. Gets hard to tell whose POV we are reading about until we get back into what’s actually happening. Takes away from the immersion.
Hmm, it's difficult to alter this because you'll frequently encounter it in future chapters. The parts you mention hold significant importance in terms of world-building. Some of them involve another mystery that I cannot reveal. I've positioned most of them in the opening chapter. It's optional—whether you choose to read it or not—as it serves as more of a gist or a glimpse.