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Comments of chapter undefined of Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality

AnotherView
AnotherViewLv1AnotherView

An escape and revenge arc would be better, many will abandon the Novel because of this choice

thewayofKABOOMMMMM
thewayofKABOOMMMMMLv13thewayofKABOOMMMMM

sorta liked this ending more commander seemed way too strong in the unchanged setting now we know he was amethyst level really gotta start telling us such things earlier man it would have been better if we knew or had some clue he was amethyst level(probably peak) from the beginning

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_KAIZER_
_KAIZER_Lv13_KAIZER_

Thanks for the chapter.

NeonGenesiss
NeonGenesissLv15NeonGenesiss

Honestly, it's a great story with potential. But the mc character development is wishy-washy. What's the point of you giving the mc a family only for him to turn out into a monster? Personally, I like him to have emotions and see him have a ruthless pragmatic streak. Accepting emotions, cruel yo his enemies and loving to his family. There is no deep introspection from the mc considering his intelligence unless he is truly a monster with no feeling. This seen felt forced, no proper foreshadowing and world building of the town before the series of events. Oddly, the mc's detached emotions have made me detached from the story and nearly quit. I'll hang on a bit to see where the story takes us.

Jimmer_Skyles
Jimmer_SkylesLv12Jimmer_Skyles

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

Thank you for the chapter đŸ„°

Xylion
XylionLv5Xylion

Still no Toki for MC...