Comments of chapter undefined of Born in Blood

Not bad. Lots going on, but the action moves down the page. All in all good stuff. Let's see how this flows into the next.

i feel like it wouldve been Nice to have dialogue from the dad instead of being told that he Said "put the gun down". Very interesting beginning though.

I am actually enjoying this story even in the first chapter . Mc seems straightforward And broken . And I like both these qualities . Keep up the Good work , author 👍

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Interesting👍🔥

Interesting

Off with great start Hope it won’t be disappointing

very interesting ! i wish i could write like that ! my english is too broken unfortunately.

it was good story to read when you working at same time your are boring.. but it to short to continue the story after work

Very good first chapter I always like these types of beginnings

Nice beginning. Hope the following chapters will be as good as this one.

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Good start. I just started reading this novel, and it's gonna cost me a lot of coins to unlock the locked chapters. RIP my bank account

Very dark at the first ep

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