I only give reviews when a story is worth one. I'm giving 5 Stars for this one. The quality is like terry pratchett and monty pythons. I see this on the first chapter, which is well written. The author makes writing almost too easy. Reading the chapters is smooth. I like that they don't info dump on the details, but gives enough to set the scene. I don't see much of a negative at this stage. I guess the negative is the story is still in progress and the chapters can be short. I've read more on honeyfeed before it was removed. Hope author continues it.

This hasn't changed from the honeyfeed contest as I remember it. Good. Still a good read.

I don't know much about k-pop and idols. So I'm curious on how this goes. So far it reads good.

Not bad. Lots going on, but the action moves down the page. All in all good stuff. Let's see how this flows into the next.

Good start. Kind of got a Spy × Family vibe from the chapter.

Interesting opening.

I like the backstory details, which lets me get a good grasp of the protagonist. I clicked on your story because your premise got my interest. Sorry if this might be a downer, but I'm gonna be honest. Your writing is good, but your format needs some work. With the dialog bunched up together, it screws up the reading flow. Dialog should be broken out in paragraph per speaker/POV. Otherwise, it can be hard to follow. You're doing a story no one else is doing here, and it has potential to really kick some power stones your way. I'd only give this kind of advice to writers who I feel can go far. Keep at it.

The opening is good, but it's also a bit of an info dump. But it's concise, that at least I have a good grasp of the protagonist.

Interesting but I guess it would make sense that being blind his other senses would be heightened.

That gotta hurt.

Lots of detail in a short paragraph. [img=recommend]