Yellow_Duck_Toy
I read all the chapters available when I found your story. It's been very enjoyable with the duel and how Yuna reacts.I want to ask whether the Bonds beyond time will be included in your story. It is quite amusing to read if Paradox somehow ended up on the Yuna timeline instead of Yugi and if the duel become 4vs1 instead of 3vs1 in the movie.
Whilst Yuna Sano battles the trap master Odion , which was an excellent duel on Yuna improved duel strategy against the Mystery Serket and Royal keeper cards . As Odion didn't want to face either Starving Venom Dragon or Divine Ferland Dragon after trying to unsuccessfully stop her summoning her 2 duel spirits on the field .Although, Marik shows up just in time to Odion from summoning the fake Winged Dragon of Ra. along with information on variable Duel King Yuna Sano on his plans for Yugi Motou and friends at Battle City tournament and doesn't want toreveal his hand to soon .As he told Odion to forfeit the locator card and rare card at after the duel was over.Unexpectedly , Seto Kaiba shows after the rare hunter disappeared and giving her ride home ( Yeah Kaiba big softie you, we won't tell Kaiba boy ,hehe ) A regular Tsunade feeling toward Yuna Sano ok, Seriously, Yuna & Seto get room already, AHH shucks .We'll see how it goes next time for our unlikely King of Games Yuna Sano and Battle City tournament with Yugi Motou and friends at the meantime .IT'S TIME TO DUEL !Continue on Cheers !
Thank you for the chapter and I feel that the story improved in many points with this duel, such as that Yuna managed to draw the cards she needed, not like before, that it would take many turns until her strategy worked and it is good that she is using more cards from the anime (Card of Sanctity, Card of Demise, Magic Bullet, Pot of Greed, etc).
El duelo estuvo genial, aunque hay algo que no tiene sentido y es que el Dragón Felgrand tiene una presencia más fuerte que la de Starving Venom, cuando literalmente uno es un Dragón de Zarc mientras que el otro es un Dragón común, claro que puede ser por su conexión con Yuna aún así se me hace raro.Tremendo el Kaiba metiendo la mejor excusa ante Yuna, para que no sospeche sobre su preocupación XD.Yo tampoco me acordaba de que todo ciudad batallas ocurria en un día.Es verdad, no había pensado en el hecho de que Mokuba había llegado a la casa de Yuna a pesar de que ella nunca le dijo a él o a Kaiba dónde vivía, Kaiba estuvo observando mucho a Yuna XD.El titere descerebrado de Marik, hasta donde yo se nunca tuvo nombre o al menos no en la versión en Español, puede que en la de Japón si tuviera nombre pero por la censura de 4kids no lo pusieron.Buen capítulo 👍🏻.