Should be Bleach Black Coffin

You glossed over intro explain system and how it works if you give character a system

continue

Yuna from other good yugioh fanfic

Also destiny is spelt wrong you addded an e

Can you make it so he helps angel and hoteye reunite with thier siblings like he did simon

probably when meetsultear again or mavis

Option 2 is closer to sctual timeline easier to plan ahead with writing story

Are you going to continue story author.

Couldnt he learn hydro and electro kinesis now sine useing cryo aero and pyro to melt cryo and air like clouds to make rain and lightning by moving the electrons in the air at high speed and temperatures

Couldnt he learn hydro and electro kinesis now sine useing cryo aero and pyro to melt cryo and air like clouds to make rain and lightning by moving the electrons in the air at high speed and temperatures

Can add a part where mc has a private conversation with laxus using his meta knowledge to connect with laxus Also thnx one of favourite stories currently released

Hope get better but you owe 5 chapters now 7

I know you dont have to say anything but, I was wondering in her Final moments was she satisfied, or did she have regrets, I will not share condolences, since in my opinion thats not what you need, nor want from everyone, I just want to know if your sister was contempt with what she had left behind.

Will you be doing Decklans mini dice game arc as well

other suggestions Maiden with eyes of blue, totem dragon, decoy dragon, Rabbit Dragon, Dragon Shrine, A wingbeat, Silvers cry

Can you add chaotic god cards for Yuna

so Kaos/Chaos his Mother

Welcome back so your not going to rewrite this story I kind of enjoyed it thoe

make it so there is a chart at least that shows current inttigration and bio enhanced like height, current max force, like hom many tons lift, speed and, sizes. Also show current progress\ mastered jutsu