Chill_ean_GUY
Personally, I consider that those interludes that you released are not interludes as such. Generally, an interlude is events unrelated to the main story, which happens in the last two interludes, which are basically a continuation of the story. My recommendation would be that for the interludes they should be short stories from external points of view not related to the Prussians. Things like the lords of pnientes, magistrates of essos, the iron bank and the common people. As I say things not related to the Prussians but the reactions in c
Personally, I consider that those interludes that you released are not interludes as such. Generally, an interlude is events unrelated to the main story, which happens in the last two interludes, which are basically a continuation of the story. My recommendation would be that for the interludes they should be short stories from external points of view not related to the Prussians. Things like the lords of pnientes, magistrates of essos, the iron bank and the common people. As I say things not related to the Prussians but rather the consequences of their actions.