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Comments of chapter undefined of Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

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Arcane1111
Arcane1111Lv5Arcane1111

I like the fact that you do this small chapter interludes because it widens the worldview of the story also it shows that the people following the mc are not just NPCs so keep up the great wirk

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Blackstarbor
BlackstarborLv1Blackstarbor

Personally, I consider that those interludes that you released are not interludes as such. Generally, an interlude is events unrelated to the main story, which happens in the last two interludes, which are basically a continuation of the story. My recommendation would be that for the interludes they should be short stories from external points of view not related to the Prussians. Things like the lords of pnientes, magistrates of essos, the iron bank and the common people. As I say things not related to the Prussians but the reactions in c

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Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv14Blasphemer_reader

As you know Game of thrones is not a one dimensional storyline there are multiple events happening at multiple places at the same time that are important and some are just for fun so have at it as you please.

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Blackstarbor
BlackstarborLv1Blackstarbor

Personally, I consider that those interludes that you released are not interludes as such. Generally, an interlude is events unrelated to the main story, which happens in the last two interludes, which are basically a continuation of the story. My recommendation would be that for the interludes they should be short stories from external points of view not related to the Prussians. Things like the lords of pnientes, magistrates of essos, the iron bank and the common people. As I say things not related to the Prussians but rather the consequences of their actions.

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GameMeister
GameMeisterLv4GameMeister

Im quite fond of the interludes. They make a fun time and are specially good when you want to take a break from writing the usual politics of ASOIAF

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Febfew
FebfewLv10Febfew

I vote interlude! Continue!