Comments of chapter undefined of Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

gracias por el capitulo ya quiero leer desde el punto de prota la verdad me parece mas interesante

this chapter has a lot of minor grammatical and punctuation mistakes. Names and other nouns are in lower case, many spaces missing after a comma, etc. You should use Grammarly for this, its free and all of these minor mistakes are easily corrected through it. Its also fast. Your grammar is good but those little mistakes break the flow and make the story look unprofessional. Grammarly will correct those small punctuation and first letter and noun capitalism easily and fast, but do not use it for major sentences as it has proven so-so for stories

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good book 😌🤌🏽

Gracias por el capítulo estuvo increíble como siempre y feliz año