Comments of chapter undefined of Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
Chill_ean_GUY
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So far the fanfic is great. During the 8-year period leading up to the Greyjoy Rebellion, he focuses on building the fortress city on the Mander River, as well as building roads and training new troops, obtaining information from the Iron Isles and strengthening his power in the Reach. As for the wedding, he uses a Prussian-style ceremony, as well as trying to maintain a good relationship with his wife, while still maintaining control over her family.
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Chill_ean_GUY
It's been really good to me, even with the tyrell marriage situation I still think this is one of the better structured GOT fics, the characters are really fleshed out and don't seem like cardboard cutouts just filling space, the OCs are pretty great too and believable. The only thing I'd add is if we could see more of the MCs physical fits( maybe when he's training with Charles), i just think that as royalty he should be far superior to his men atleast physically. Other than that it's been pretty good keep up the great work author.
develops trade, improves roads, strengthens security by creating camps for soldiers both to train the newcomers of the meadow to replace the Prussians who left as well as to hunt down bandits from their lands and improve the coast defenses against the future greyjoy rebellion by creating several towers in the coast so when the ships are seen, you only need to light the fire and all the others also lit, warning of the arrival of the enemy fleet, giving time for the defenders to assume their posts and prepare defenses such as the famous harbor chains used to prevent the entry of ships aiming to burn all the ships inside.
A few suggestions only. 1: I hope that the MC demonstrates his physical capabilities as the king of Prussia, and the author can state that the physical development of the nobles and the king is due to intense training. 2: About magic, you can say that the Prussians are incapable of using it or that their magic in this world is unique, as they have developed capabilities that are in the bible or related myths (examples: Sanction, the mighty men of King David, Solomon, Moses, Daniel, Joseph of Egypt, Elijah, Joshua and Caleb, Shamgar the predecessor of Deborah) in addition to objects and knights from the myth of King Arthur such as Excalibur. About swords, I recommend a weaker or modified version of the ones that exist on the DxD and Fate Séries anime wiki. Still about magic, you can take the path of the elves. 3: Remember to fortify yourself against the West and send lots of spies there, it's a good plot to conflict or sabotage Tywin. 4: Others reincarnated to explain differences and inconsistencies and create more plots with other continents. (Google translator)
just remembering the last lannister gold mine stopped working 3 years before the GOT series, which means that for a few years tywin has been thinking about how to compensate for the future loss of mines, so he has the idea of creating a merchant fleet to They stopped relying on the mines, but during the greyjoy rebellion before the fleet left port it was burned by the ironborn leaving their efforts in recent years totally wasted.
Por qué no hacer que se ganen la posición de su esposa es un hombre rico no necesita que le den dinero que no tiene puede hacerlos trabajar para el y que le muestren su utilidad y en vez de casarse con la hija de olena puede casarse Margaery manipulando la sutilmente desde una edad temprana para evitar cualquier tipo de traición que te parece?
