DubiousTone
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You've got me. This obviously isn't some zero-effort novel, and I'll be following your work from here on out. What a pleasure to read.
This is a rough sketch of the map in the novel, giving you a slight idea of what it looks like.
Author, I am onboard.
the start is interesting .....I like fate and destiny concepts. how I wish I too have powers...lol that's not happening though
Good start.
so far so good
ok nice start
Ok this has potential!!
It's good not trust anyoneđŻ straight away đ
It's honestly a good start. I didn't really feel like it was slow paced or confusing.
