Zenfree
stuff needs to actually happen ur getting lost in all the powers which are cool but we need to get a move on. Also doesn't he have wings to fly? u just forget that he has wings and horns?(u can't keep his goals or plans from the reader if ur this slow paced coz that's gonna be the only thing keeping people around). Also by the time his body matures i think he's the same age as Scarlet witch so nice.
there's nothing realistic about this ur writing a isekai about a guy who wasn't even a normal human to begin with. but đgl
Zenfree:This story is a fast paced one. However, he is still young, and much of the MCU events are still far away. Thus, he is focused on his abilities, making money, and protecting his family. This story is from a realistic point of view as in: If you were to reincarnate, what would you do? Thanks for reading and commenting.