Zenfree
stuff needs to actually happen ur getting lost in all the powers which are cool but we need to get a move on. Also doesn't he have wings to fly? u just forget that he has wings and horns?(u can't keep his goals or plans from the reader if ur this slow paced coz that's gonna be the only thing keeping people around). Also by the time his body matures i think he's the same age as Scarlet witch so nice.