Comments of chapter undefined of Ascendant: Struggle

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Nice start!

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IM EXCITED

this was really well laid out. while I can't say if the plot is being rolled out or I'f all of this is just the premise, it's still rather intriguing. it also makes it feel like more events could still happen, but at the same time like it's heading for a lull in the action. anyway, on to the next chapter!

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the fight scene was really intense ngl

Great chapter ^_^

Ni chapter

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Good first chapter! One piece of advice: make the paragraphs shorter (2-3 lines). Almost all readers use the wn app on their phones. Hence, shorter paragraphs can easily fit within the screens as opposed to big paragraphs that take up the whole screen and then some more. Good luck 👍🏼

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