Comments of chapter undefined of Dark Nephilim( Supernatural )

I like the idea but you need somebody to edit this

I don’t understand one thing happening. Please.

Good Work

Yeahhhh, nope; can't continue with this mess.

does anyone know of a "good" supernatural novel?

Dizzy

I’d recommend working on your dialogue (on how it’s formatted.” “It should look like this.” But it’s inconsistent in your story. You sometimes use hyphens, quotation marks, and sometimes nothing at all. It’s hard to tell what’s going on.